Candidature On Hold Email To Candidate

Dear Ashterli,Spoken language is different from written language. The latter is a little more formal than the former. Above all, in official communication, there is no place for informal language. I have provided suggestions since you have asked for those specif...

Dear Candidate Name,I hope you are doing well. As you are aware, there is an opening for an HR position in our organization, and you have expressed your interest in applying for it. You have also attended two rounds of interviews at our office.Unfortunately, we ...

Dear Nisha,Generally, I recommend junior members to write drafts and upload them here. However, in light of the corrected draft of another member, I am providing you with a draft in the official language.Date: -To,Mr/Ms _______________________ (address of the ca...

Hi Dinesh, can you please let me know the informal language which you think I used.Hi Dinesh,Can you please let me know the informal language that you think I used?

Hi Dinesh,Can you please help me with the draft.Thanks,Soni

Dear Dinesh,Thank you for your assistance! I must say, this draft is truly impressive.I am eager to enhance my skills in writing emails. Could you please recommend some tasks or websites where I can further develop my knowledge?Thank you,Soni

Dear ASHTERLI,In your draft, you have mixed formal and informal language. In official communication, the usage of informal language is discouraged. The second challenge of your draft is wordiness. It needs to be made crisp.All the best!Dinesh Divekar

Dear Nisha,If building drafting skills were easy by reading material from websites, then you would have built those skills by now. Referring to websites is good; however, when practicing business writing, you need a guide who can provide feedback for improvement...